Claimed: Helen [2/2]

[Kendrick 4,724]

 

*For Keller

[Exlaxchronicles 415]

First thing I notice is the green honey comb/bathroom ceramic tile pattern. I like it as it contrasts the BG really nice.

The lighting isn't too harsh  on the player and your SIG has enough contrast/sharpness to it as well.

My.only concern is the font. The Kel isn't too bad as it has some contrast to the green BG, but becomes awash with the ler.

Real sweet sig, just needs a font adjustment IMO.

On 11/20/2017 at 3:21 PM, Kendrick said:

 

[Kesler 1,514]

 

I like the use of a different size canvas and the background is something different we havent see from you. The render placement is good and the render sticks out really nicely. The only thing for me is the text, it could use some serious work. I believe a lot to do with it is the clipping mask over top of it. It blends in and is too dark to read really. But not bad at all.